Learning from Other Authors: The Good and the Bad

You guys, I cannot stress enough how important it is for you to read consistently if you want to improve your writing. I’m of the opinion that being part of a critique group is the absolute best way to improve your writing as quickly and as reliably as possible. However, if you are not part of a critique group (and even if you are in one), you should read on a consistent basis to gain knowledge about how to improve your storytelling or prose or character development or anything else that goes into making a good book. If you never improve, you’re likely to start losing your edge, and you may not even realize it until someone edits your new manuscript.

This was a lesson I had been told year after year by writer friends, but I never truly took them seriously. I worried that if I read outside my genre, I would get bored and DNF the book. I also feared if I read too often, other people’s work would influence my stories in a way that would make them feel devoid of my style. However, it was only after I started reading consistently for the first time since high school that I gained a new perspective on why we should read other’s work.

Sometimes, we choose to revisit a book we loved in junior high/high school, and sometimes as we’re reading it, we see things we did not see before, and it’s not looking good. Suddenly, someone you used to praise as your favorite author is someone who’s books you can barely stand, and you learn what not to do when writing your own stories. This happened to me earlier this year. And then it happened again…and again…all with different book series from the same author.

The most disheartening part is this author is self-published, like me, and several of her books did not list an editor of any kind. However, that hardly seemed to make any difference as even books that did have an editor were still riddled with typos and other issues. I have never in my life thought I would read a book with over 200 typos in it (yes, I counted), among storytelling missteps, and inaccuracies in the book’s own worldbuilding. I don’t want to end up publishing something like that, and I doubt any of you want to either. I would be mortified.

I knew when I started to reread this author’s books that I would not find them as engaging as I once did when I was a teen, but I did not expect to find myself constantly being taken out of the story due to the numerous plot holes, out-of-character decisions, unlikeable characters who were meant to be likeable, and typos and formatting errors. It was exhausting to get through, but at the same time I wanted to stick it out because there were still moments I truly loved that I think this author did very well. As of writing this, the author has self-published four series and is working on their fifth. I managed to read through three of her four finished series, but I cannot continue without some kind of palate cleanser. Maybe once I’m feeling more refreshed I will finish what I started.

One thing I will always praise this author for is their imaginative premises, which often outshine the plots that rise from them. They draw heavy inspiration from old fairy tales, like those of the brothers Grimm, stories from other European countries, and various mythologies. I can tell this author has a passion for what they write, but I wish they would have invested more time into polishing their books before putting them out on the market. Every single one of her books reads like a first draft, not a finished story. I learned a very valuable lesson from revisiting these teen favorites. They still hold a special place in my heart, and now I have a new appreciation for them because I can see how much I’ve grown in my own craft thanks to my critique group.

Revisiting these series was a journey in and of itself. As I continue to revisit old favorites and dive into new books on my To-Read List, I hope to nourish my writing with new insights and ideas from talented, beloved authors. Dear reader (and writer!), thank you so much for your stay here! I hope you too will flourish in your writing by reading others’ work. Have a great one, and I’ll see you soon!

JaNoWriMo: The NaNoWriMo Alternative

If you’re like me, then when you first heard the term “NaNoWriMo,” you thought it was just one of those no-stakes challenges people take part in, no different from making a New Year’s resolution. I was introduced to NaNo by my eighth grade English teacher. He made it one of our assignments, but it wasn’t something we would be graded on; he just wanted us to have fun. And I did!

If it weren’t for that teacher, I doubt I would have developed a love for writing as early as I did (I say that about a lot of people, but it’s true).

In short, NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) is an annual writing challenge where participants are encouraged to write the rough draft of a 50,000+ word novel during the month of November. Anyone can join whether they’re a seasoned author, they’re just starting out, or even if they’ve never written before. It’s a challenge, so it’s supposed to be difficult, but that doesn’t mean it can’t be fun. Countless writers, myself included, used this challenge to hone our skills, step out of our comfort zones, and share our progress with other participants. It’s a wonderful community-builder that spans globally.

S0, imagine my surprise when, 9 years after first hearing about NaNo, I found out there was a whole non-profit organization behind the challenge. Discovering this didn’t change how I felt about NaNo. Afterall, I’d been participating for years. Surely this November wouldn’t be any different… But then I saw the dreaded “NaNoWriMo Controversy” in an Instagram reel. My first thought was, “Why would someone cheat for an internet competition? That’s what the controversy is, right? Someone must have fudged their numbers in order to ‘win.'”

Wrong! The truth was nowhere near as innocent. I won’t go into exactly what happened, because it is a very uncomfortable subject, but if you want to seek the answer yourself, be warned!

After doing some research it turns out this non-profit, which also goes by the name NaNoWriMo, has had a lot of controversy over the years. Things like supporting scam publishers, making false promises to participants, discriminating against disabled volunteers, and not doing background checks on any of their volunteers which led to some safety issues. You can learn more from this video by Savy Writes Books, who interviewed former volunteers and participants of NaNoWriMo.

At this point I decided I wouldn’t be participating in NaNo for the foreseeable future, and then NaNo released a statement that cemented my stance. As a creative, one of my biggest fears is that someone will steal my ideas, but an even bigger fear is that AI will be the thief. How did AI get tangled up in a writing challenge? Let me break it down for you, dear reader.

One of NaNo’s sponsors is an AI resource called Pro Writing Aid, which NaNo actively encouraged its participants to use. One of PWA’s newest features is to generate text for its users, effectively writing for the writer. “But who cares?” you might be asking.

Maybe you don’t, but it matters a lot to writers. This is a challenge built off the honor system. If you’re just going to cheat your way through NaNoWriMo, then why are you even participating? With such AI resources, you could have a rough draft for a novel in minutes with little input from yourself. That is NOT writing. In addition, AI “learns” how to improve itself by studying the work of other writers, meaning AI is effectively plagiarizing, and so are you by using AI to write in your stead.

People were not happy with NaNoWriMo. If the organization had apologized and distanced themselves from PWA, they might not have such a big mess on their hands. But they decided to double down by releasing an article entitled “I can’t believe NaNoWriMo is endorsing a person/company who does _____!” This post is long enough, so I won’t get into it here, but if you want more insight, I suggest you check out this video by D’Angelo (I tried submitting quotes from the article itself, but NaNoWriMo edited it so heavily you cannot find any trace of their previous statements on AI users).

So, yeah, I’m not doing NaNoWriMo anymore, even if they go back on their stance regarding AI. I just can’t trust them, and neither can thousands of others. Now, you might have looked at the title and thought, “What is JaNoWriMo and why hasn’t Kass gotten to it yet?”

JaNoWriMo (January Novel Writing Month) is a lovely idea a writer friend of mine pitched on her Instagram. It is similar to NaNoWriMo, but instead of being a challenge to write 50,000+ words in a single month, JaNo focuses on writers building community with each other and sharing our stress-free writing progress.

JaNo is a time of inspiration, encouragement, advice, and cozy vibes. November is such a hectic month with Thanksgiving and preparing for Christmas. Really it’s one of the worst months of the year to hold a writing challenge, especially since stress often gives me burnout and stumps my creativity. January, however, is after all the hustle and bustle of the previous year, and it marks the beginning of a new one! Why not start 2025 with something to boost community and creativity?

If you want to learn more, check out @rebekah.ackerman.writes, the wonderful writer who pitched this idea, on Instagram. She seriously deserves the engagement!

Thank you for reading, friends! Happy reading and happy writing, without AI, of course. 😉